Comments on: How to Write a Winning Scholarship Essay – Part 4: Revising the Essay

By: Joshua

Joshua — Tue, 31 Aug 2010 02:45:45 +0000

Hey Manal,

I believe you can focus on more than one thing, but I would stick to about 2 if you can. You can focus on more if they are related things though, in my opinion.

By: Manal

Manal — Sun, 29 Aug 2010 15:33:35 +0000

Hey josh, this helped me a lot, ièm applying for td scholarship this year, but i,m confused because i wanna focus on more than one thing in my application, can i do that or do we have to chose one community involvement

By: Dowe Sun

Dowe Sun — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 04:18:06 +0000

Thank you so much! This was EXTREMELY helpful. I have been going through your site and your information is truly invaluable. I think I’m going to enjoy writing these essays a lot more now =) Thanks again!

By: Julia G

Julia G — Mon, 06 Jul 2009 17:54:51 +0000

Thank you so much!
This writing style totally makes sense thanks for all of your help!

By: Joshua

Joshua — Sun, 26 Apr 2009 04:59:51 +0000

Hey Ribka,

No problem! I’m so glad you found this helpful =)

By: Ribka

Ribka — Sun, 05 Apr 2009 18:05:58 +0000

THANK YOU!!!!
I am just finished doing the writing and I’ll come back in a day or two.
It means a lot to me. Thank you for helping me!

By: Jessie W.

Jessie W. — Sat, 11 Oct 2008 02:56:24 +0000

Thank you sooooo much! This really helps with my application for Loran Scholarship. I was having some trouble and I found practically everything on you post.

THANK YOU!